英语六级写作范文解析：烟草生产和消耗
We meet smokers almost everywhere , in the st reet , in shops , at the railway station , on the camp us and in many other public a reas . T his explains the astonis hing sta tistic figure of 1. 1 billion smokers out of 5. 6 billion people in the world , occupying about 20% of the world’s population .
The ha rmful effect that smoking has upon people mainly lies in two aspects : money los s and health deterioration . In the figure , we can see that the annual consumption of tobacco amounts to 200 billion dollars , which , if spent on public welfare , can benefit a great many poor people .
It is known to all that smoking does a lot of ha rm, not only to smokers themselves , but also to people a round who are actually unconscious victims . According to the statistics obtained , approxima tely 3 million people die of lung cance r and other fat al diseases every year .
For tunately , nowadays more and more people have become awa re of the harmful effect of smoking . Tobacco consumption is decr easing . Tobacco production is decreasing ( has dropped to 14 .2 billion pounds in 1995 as against 14 .364 billion pounds in 1994 ) . The numbe r of smokers is decreasing . Finally , we believe in the advance of society , we believe in a new world without smoking , we believe in people .
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结构分析：
· Pictur e 2———吸烟者到处可见
烟民占世界人口⋯⋯
· Pictur e 3———吸烟既费钱又损健康
每年烟草耗去⋯⋯
· Pictur e 4———吸烟导致疾病的死亡
· Pictur e 1———意识到吸烟危害导致烟草生产下降, 消耗
下降, 烟民人数下降
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内容分析：
本文是一篇图画图表作文, 要求说明并解释每一张小图, 最后指出烟草生产和消耗的趋势。本文的写作要用到多种文体。写作前必须仔细看图, 作出分析才能写得层次分明, 覆盖四幅小图。本题曾是一道考研写作题, 作者借题发挥, 撰文供学习。
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万能句型：
public a reas 公共场所
astonishing statistic figure 惊人的统计数字
occupy v . 占
have an effect on 对⋯⋯有影响
lie in 在于
money loss and health deterioration 又费钱又损健康
cons umption n . 消耗
tobacco n . 烟草
amount to 达
public welfare 公共福利
unconscious victims 不知不觉的受害者, 被动吸烟者
lung cancer 肺癌
fatal disease 致命疾病