英语六级写作真题练习：减园浪费

　　You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below ：

　　目前有些校园内浪费现象严重

　　浪费的危害

　　从我做起，杜绝浪费

　　参考范文

　　In recent years, the problem of waste has become increasingly serious on university campuses. According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV, the year of 2002 has viitmssed an astonished waste that amounts to a total value of RMB 52,860,000 in Chinese university canq)uses.

　　Such a phenomenon may bring about many unfavorable conse­quences» To begin with, parents will have to suffer heavier financial bur­den for most students still count on their parents to finish their university education. In addition, waste will surely make students form bad habits, some even losing their independence and social responsibility. Last but not least, the extravagant atmosphere may come into being in universities, which obviously goes against the aim of university education.

　　As far as I am concerned，I am determined to save on various resources such as food, water and electricity. Only when every one of us realizes that thrift is an indispensable virtue can we put an end to the waste phenomenon.

　　一句话点评

　　毫无疑问，第一段的数据和CCTV将吸引阅卷老师的眼球，同 时使用了 witness，astonished, amount to 等好词及用 the year of 2002 作主语的拟人修辞，将给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印象。

　　快捷构思

　　第一段:直接描述现象，也就是该段中心“目前有些校园内浪费现象严重”。而后“一句话”具体数例支持该现象。

　　第二段:以模板句提出该段中心“浪费的危害”，t。begin with, in addition和last but not least分别引出三种危害来支 持段落中心。

　　第三段:直接简要展现自己的观点，并以倒装句结尾，发出号召。

　　优美短语

　　1. suffer heavier financial burden 承受更沉重的经济负担

　　2.count on依靠(优于常用的depend on)

　　3.come into being 形成

　　4.go against 违背

　　5. be determined to 决心

　　6.Only when every one of us realizes that thrift is an indispensa­ble virtue can we put an end to the waste phenomenon.(倒装句结尾，增加文章的亮点)